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  • Jasmine Green

    mumbled "Love?"

    9 months agoReply
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    I've been gone a while, but here is a new poem I've written - it's quite a personal one if you can't guess.
    Leave a like and review on my movella if you wish
    P O E T R YA collection of poems portraying what's going on inside my head. Each one is in a different mood, or a different setting, usually described by the title....

    J x

    'He says it

    But he doesn't live it

    Those cold tongued words

    That hold me to the

    Eyes closed

    Head closed

    Lips closed

    Moments



    The ones where

    His breath

    Is more than his feeling

    And the certainty

    Of longing

    Is drifting from his eyes

    Into mine,



    My subconscious spilling from the seams

    Flowing with my

    Locks

    And frocks;

    The important things.



    It should be dripping

    Seeping

    Through me,

    Overwhelming

    Suspending me in skylit

    Whiteness

    But all it is

    is drowning,

    Abandoning me

    In darkness

    placeless-ness;



    An overflow of feeling

    But a deficit of words'
    doughertylorcan
    2 weeks ago
    This poem you wrote is amazing! Trust me. I just send it to my bride at https://cherylhearts.com/over-50-dating/ and she is confused. Maybe you have some more works to show? Me with my bride in love with poetry.