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  • Romeo Lee
    1 months agoReply
    very nice
    Crown Phoenix
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    The scars on her back are a constant reminder of Him. The one whose name shall never be uttered upon her lips ever again. To a human, Cassandra's species of Phoenix is a myth, a legend. To her classmates,...
  • Romeo Lee
    1 months agoReply
    Very nice pls write more
    Love Across The Ages
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    Maids, servants, kings, princes, silk production non existent along with coffee. Where is Amanda? The 1400s? Close. Europe early 14th century, the 1300s.
  • Romeo Lee
    2 months agoReply
    Very nice. Good story line. Few or no grammar errors. A bit cliche, but still overall a good read.
    Shattering Expectations
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    She used to be a princess, fiery and naive, but all things change. She married and grew into a woman. Her son was her prince, growing up hearing tales about a family of three who lived in their kingdom....
    Blue Rose
    2 months ago
    Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. It's probably cliche because I roughly based it on Aladdin (the first four chapters or so were originally a one-shot written for a competition). There are worse things a story can be than cliche, though, so I'm glad I haven't royally messed this one up. Thanks again for leaving your opinion! :D
    Romeo Lee
    2 months ago
    Np i hope you write many more great stories.
    Blue Rose
    2 months ago
    Thank you. :)
  • Romeo Lee
    3 months agoReply
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    Very nice
    Trial of Man (人間の闘争)
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    [AU - Historical Fantasy] The peaceful city of Akatsuki is taken over by hostile forces when the country of Amegakure is invaded. Suddenly, what they once had is now a luxury, but their will to survive...
    hannymae
    3 months ago
    Ty. I'll post the rest of the chapters.
    LyricSoUp
    3 months ago
    I hope you continue to have such quality articles to share with everyone! I believe a lot of people will be like to read this article! lyricsoup.com/languages
  • Romeo Lee
    3 months agoReply
    Story seems good, but could be better with some grammar improvements. For example instead of " Diana got light blue hair." Say Diana has light blue hair." Edit- This is just my suggestion, but review your whole story and read through it and see if it sounds right to you.
    Danganronpa 2. Monchrome rebirth.
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    Every story has an end. Every story has its begin. Since the fateful days of the BSTT incident, the school took every precaution to check up on their students. There was even made a foundation to make...
    Romeo Lee
    3 months ago
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    Felicia McLaren
    3 months ago
    Saltemor, are you ready with the next chapter?)))
    Salthemor
    3 months ago
    huh?
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